said Amelia while the duration of the explosion was happening. As the smoke clears, Izael's shadowy figure appears one knee trying to regain posture. Izael wipes the dust off his coat and said condenscendingly , "Not bad Amelia. I never expected you to use the Abigas' final move so soon... Your out a sword and I still have all 8. You were never really good at math"
Izael aims the Solomon sabre approximately three feet from Amelias left arm. Amelia slowly reaches behind herself. Izael continues his speech "The Solomon Sabre can invoke spirits inside any vessel creating a lifeless monster... Water makes a good vessel" the sword shoots a beam torwards his mark. Amelia quickly responds and throws a brass star, interupting the beams path. The brass star absorbs the energy and emitts a giant pulsating aura as if the light is trying to escape. "I know all about the 72 artifacts, Izael. The spirits of the Solomon sabre can easily be absorbed through brass, oh and one another thing... (waves arm to the sky) I have alot more swords in my arsenal than u can see. That dagger lounged into the ground right next you is Michaels beacon" as Amelia finished the sentence, a giant fiery object comes from the sky. Izael stares in the sky in awe and shock and remarks "Impossible, Thats the sword of Michael! Since when did you..." the fiery sword immediately accelerates and causes a sonic boom as if breaking the sound barrier. Izael tries to run out of the swords landing mark, but is found being unable to move. Amelia smiles and says "Another thing you probably don't know about the Abigas steel is that the sword in conscious and is always in use, even after it explodes. Right now the shards are holding you in place." Izael responds "So the dagger in the ground, exploding your sword... Even getting hit by me as to move farther from the site.... It was all part of your plan? Impressive but..." the sword crashes and causes a huge fiery wave right next Izael. The heat is so intense that within a 1 mile radius all the snow melts into water. Amelia sprints away from and removes her giant coat to use in a surfboard like buoyancy. Amelia jumps with her coat in front of her as the waves clash against her.
The waves clear and Amelia is standing on her extremely thick & buoyant coat. She sits down in an indian cross and pulls out a blade handle and begins to meditate. In the distance, Izael pops his head out of the water, out of breath. He pulls out another of his blades, the Sharp of Astaroth. The sword glows, and in a moments notice, he begins to float back till his feet touches the surface. Izael is no longer wearing his coat. He becomes able to walk on water. He softly says to himself "If I hadn't removed my coat which was what the shards were holding, the impact would've definitely killed me.... Its official, Amelia is here to kill...hmm maybe I should take this more serious" Izael then chants while holding his sword in front of him. In a flash, Izaels physical form dissapears. Amelia opens one eye and notices that Izael is nowhere to be seen. "either hes under water or used one of the demons abilities to become invisible. Either way, the eye of Vassago will find him." Amelia chants and point her sword forward and shouts "Abigas Steel, reform!" shards shoot up straight torwards the sky then torwards Amelias blade handle. She then reaches for an amulet she had under her shirt "eyes of a Vassago, seek me Izael!" the demonic enchanted item begins to speak in a dark raspy voice. "my dark divine sight can only seek that which does not breathe" Amelia grunts in frustration, stands up and pleads "find me the solomon sabre!" the eye of vassago radiates and glows a path torwards the sunken sword. Amelia dives in the water and swims as deep as she can. She finally is only 10 feet away from the sword but feels already out of breath. She continue & struggles with all her capacity to reach the sword. Then she eventually grabs it, but feels so faint that she cannot swim back up without suffocating. She pulls out the brass star she threw earlier and tapped it against the sword. The sword then absorbed the energy back. Amelia chokes a bit and has a few seconds of oxygen left.
She points the Solomon Sabre straight ahead from her and the high energy releases. Amelia begins to faint. The giant sphere radius of water gathers towards the center and begins to form a giant water dragon. Amelia picks upherself up barely but enough to regain her stance. "spirit of the sabre...cough... Form around me and expand!" Amelia commands. The water dragon follows orders and begins to spin around her, creating a shield around her. The dragons body then begins to expand outwards rapidly and powerfully in a spiralling motion. The cyclone expands as large as the 1 mile radius left by the sword of Michael and then it dies out back into the ground. Amelia lose composure and stands very dizzily. "Its a shame that attack missed" Izael appears right in front of Amelia and slashes torwards her neck, Amelia barely blocks it with the Abigas sword. The immense clash creates an intense splash of sparks that warmed up the already freezing atmosphere for a split second. "How did you dodge that attack?" Amelia says surprised and infuriated. Izael chuckles then responds "I was already close when you summoned the spirit. I just stood closer and was took advantage of the safety zone within the attack. But the real question is; can you dodge this attack?" with 2 hands, Izael attempts a stronger powerful swing from the sides aiming at Amelias waist. Amelia is too weak to lift up her swords, but instead commands the Steel of Abigas to explode again. As the sword ignites Amelia aims the Solomon sabre torwards her boots and shouts "spirits, lift me unto the air!" the boots light up and Amelia gets launched into the air. Izael swing contacts with Amelia, gashing her legs greatly. The Steel of Abigas explodes and knocks Izael far away. Solomons Sabre was already weakened from the previous attack and was only able to keep Amelia in the air for 4 seconds, enough to stray away from the shards. She falls after the enchantment wears off and is in excrutiating pain
Story draft
Thursday, February 16, 2012
Sunday, February 12, 2012
Draft : prelude/ ending
Prelude - The Final Wish
"The only love you will ever know...
Is the impetuous lust that you will have, to hate me.
The only willpower that you shall endow, is the ardent desire to kill me.
Don't seek me... Hunt me.
Our erratic paths will inevitably cross like the silver blades of sworn rivals dueling upon a vast field of white lilies, befitting to their graves.
And when our blades kiss, the clash of our steel will spark into my soul, which has already tasted the lives of thousand. My blade shall kiss ur throat and the night shall be intimate like our cursed afflicted bond.
Hate me... It will be all you will have to live for..."
"Those were the last words left by him. They forever haunt me like restless spirits who plague my spiteful reality of an abyssal torment. It was 3 years ago since I stared into those leering eyes, cold as the artic chills of the devils breath. I was crying helpessly, weak into his sick game. He took my family, my friends... my soul. He was once my reason of being, but now i've lost all reasoning. I am but an avenger wandering the eternal, throughout this world without end, which will soon be but a beacon to your next life and a tombstone for your pathetic corpse.
I've struggled, i've killed, i've survived... Just for him. Im coming for him... But really i'm doing it for me. This promise... This vendetta, is the last bond we shall ever share. His blade may have harvested by the thousands... But this blade of mine has tasted the blood of a million. Its only shame is that his putrid blood is the last my blade will ever taste.
Izael, I've lived by your words, and now its time you will die by them." - Amelia
A feral brown hooded coat thick and tough as a mason's stone. Dark venom cargo pants embodied in curvy sexy legs that can kill with its hypnotic motion. black panther boots which crunches in the snow. the bottom of the boots bares sharp jagged edges ready to prowl as quick as a sheathed weapon. Finally accompanied by sleepless eyes, who've said their final prayers to sleep. Surrounding this concocted arsenal of a femme fatale assassin, is but a white tundra of snow. The night is dark & malevolent with only the crescent moon in the sky being barely able to provide a source of energy into the blizzarding barrens of a freezing hell.
"He sure chose an suitable place to die." Amelia whispered to herself. The trail of footsteps fade by the heartbeat. It's as if she is followed by the very God of Death who will hide the traces of the fabled battle to be upheld.
Amelia continues to treck through the white valley of black skies for 8 hours. The pinnacle of a mountain starts to peak in the distance. Muscles tightens her cheeks, bearing a smile, something she hasn't ever done ever since before the 3 years of her dark withdrawal. She scoped from the distance, a dark figure with a long black coat. Amelia immediately unsheathes her blade, The Abigas steel, gifted from the great general of hell, Eligos. Her grip tightens, her walk changes, and her hood comes down. For a brash moment, the world stood still, and there they were; the two greater evils: Vengeance & Wrath. Face to face, were the north and south. They are now but opposite rays that bent through time and come to meet again.
"Hair long & untamed like the gustful winds. A scar across the face, which like my hatred, will never go away. Eyes as red as the horned beast that you are. & a face that will be never be forgotten" Amelia roared. She immediately got in stance.
"Your words have always charmed me Amelia. Its your actions that dissapoint me. Are you really different than the squirming poor excuse of a human being you were then?" said the dark enigma known as Izael. Concealing his weapons and his intentions is a large black coat stitched from a rough hide leather that seem strong enough to withstand bullet piercings. He opens his coats and reveals an arsenal of 8 swords. He pulls out two, the Barbas Blade & the Solomon Sabre.
"Amelia, you are nothing but a weighted vessel for your tired soul to burden. Let me release your pain... And you don't have to pain yourself with this frivolous oath of yours. You're not a killer..." before Izael was able to finish his sentence, Amelia had already thrown a giant twisted dagger into his chest. She swiftly strides towards Izael with a quick X shaped two strike hit, she disarms him from his two swords and then thrusts the sword into his heart. Izael slowly bleeds from his mouth. Tries to grab the sword, but Amelia side swipes Izael to the floor, she rolls towards the two swords and plunges them into his lower torso. Amelia still maintains focus, and whilst on one knee, grabs another knife she had hidden in her ankles and forces it down his throat. "Thanks, but I can release my own pain." Amelia says while trying to catch her breath.
A voice whispers behind her ears "The flaws of a vengeful soul, is that they are so determined towards their goal they lose sight of whats real" she turns around and is immediately met with a kick to the face. "The Barbas blade is forged with radiant light that induce hallucinations, you were nowhere near touching me" Izael is seen standing unharmed & with both blades wielded. "let the real fight begin Amelia" boasted Izael. "you're right... Sometimes people can tend to lose sight on what is real." said Amelia as she reached her arms towards The Abigas Steel and the sword ignites and explodes into shards towards Izael. "I knew it was a mirage once my dagger hit you. It's meant to explode on heavy impact. I knew you would put such a petty trick on me! So i just waited for you to strike and break the spell.
"The only love you will ever know...
Is the impetuous lust that you will have, to hate me.
The only willpower that you shall endow, is the ardent desire to kill me.
Don't seek me... Hunt me.
Our erratic paths will inevitably cross like the silver blades of sworn rivals dueling upon a vast field of white lilies, befitting to their graves.
And when our blades kiss, the clash of our steel will spark into my soul, which has already tasted the lives of thousand. My blade shall kiss ur throat and the night shall be intimate like our cursed afflicted bond.
Hate me... It will be all you will have to live for..."
"Those were the last words left by him. They forever haunt me like restless spirits who plague my spiteful reality of an abyssal torment. It was 3 years ago since I stared into those leering eyes, cold as the artic chills of the devils breath. I was crying helpessly, weak into his sick game. He took my family, my friends... my soul. He was once my reason of being, but now i've lost all reasoning. I am but an avenger wandering the eternal, throughout this world without end, which will soon be but a beacon to your next life and a tombstone for your pathetic corpse.
I've struggled, i've killed, i've survived... Just for him. Im coming for him... But really i'm doing it for me. This promise... This vendetta, is the last bond we shall ever share. His blade may have harvested by the thousands... But this blade of mine has tasted the blood of a million. Its only shame is that his putrid blood is the last my blade will ever taste.
Izael, I've lived by your words, and now its time you will die by them." - Amelia
A feral brown hooded coat thick and tough as a mason's stone. Dark venom cargo pants embodied in curvy sexy legs that can kill with its hypnotic motion. black panther boots which crunches in the snow. the bottom of the boots bares sharp jagged edges ready to prowl as quick as a sheathed weapon. Finally accompanied by sleepless eyes, who've said their final prayers to sleep. Surrounding this concocted arsenal of a femme fatale assassin, is but a white tundra of snow. The night is dark & malevolent with only the crescent moon in the sky being barely able to provide a source of energy into the blizzarding barrens of a freezing hell.
"He sure chose an suitable place to die." Amelia whispered to herself. The trail of footsteps fade by the heartbeat. It's as if she is followed by the very God of Death who will hide the traces of the fabled battle to be upheld.
Amelia continues to treck through the white valley of black skies for 8 hours. The pinnacle of a mountain starts to peak in the distance. Muscles tightens her cheeks, bearing a smile, something she hasn't ever done ever since before the 3 years of her dark withdrawal. She scoped from the distance, a dark figure with a long black coat. Amelia immediately unsheathes her blade, The Abigas steel, gifted from the great general of hell, Eligos. Her grip tightens, her walk changes, and her hood comes down. For a brash moment, the world stood still, and there they were; the two greater evils: Vengeance & Wrath. Face to face, were the north and south. They are now but opposite rays that bent through time and come to meet again.
"Hair long & untamed like the gustful winds. A scar across the face, which like my hatred, will never go away. Eyes as red as the horned beast that you are. & a face that will be never be forgotten" Amelia roared. She immediately got in stance.
"Your words have always charmed me Amelia. Its your actions that dissapoint me. Are you really different than the squirming poor excuse of a human being you were then?" said the dark enigma known as Izael. Concealing his weapons and his intentions is a large black coat stitched from a rough hide leather that seem strong enough to withstand bullet piercings. He opens his coats and reveals an arsenal of 8 swords. He pulls out two, the Barbas Blade & the Solomon Sabre.
"Amelia, you are nothing but a weighted vessel for your tired soul to burden. Let me release your pain... And you don't have to pain yourself with this frivolous oath of yours. You're not a killer..." before Izael was able to finish his sentence, Amelia had already thrown a giant twisted dagger into his chest. She swiftly strides towards Izael with a quick X shaped two strike hit, she disarms him from his two swords and then thrusts the sword into his heart. Izael slowly bleeds from his mouth. Tries to grab the sword, but Amelia side swipes Izael to the floor, she rolls towards the two swords and plunges them into his lower torso. Amelia still maintains focus, and whilst on one knee, grabs another knife she had hidden in her ankles and forces it down his throat. "Thanks, but I can release my own pain." Amelia says while trying to catch her breath.
A voice whispers behind her ears "The flaws of a vengeful soul, is that they are so determined towards their goal they lose sight of whats real" she turns around and is immediately met with a kick to the face. "The Barbas blade is forged with radiant light that induce hallucinations, you were nowhere near touching me" Izael is seen standing unharmed & with both blades wielded. "let the real fight begin Amelia" boasted Izael. "you're right... Sometimes people can tend to lose sight on what is real." said Amelia as she reached her arms towards The Abigas Steel and the sword ignites and explodes into shards towards Izael. "I knew it was a mirage once my dagger hit you. It's meant to explode on heavy impact. I knew you would put such a petty trick on me! So i just waited for you to strike and break the spell.
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